نعيب زماننا و العيب فينا
و ما لزماننا عيب سوانا
و نهجو ذا الزمان بغير ذنب
و لو نطق الزمان لنا هجانا
فدنيانا التصنع و الترائي
و نحن به نخادع من يرانا
و ليس الذئب يأكل لحم ذئب
و يأكل بعضنا بعضاً عيانا
hatkalem fi short points,ha na2esh shwayet notes fi el she3r da
1- 2a3taked eno el nas fi baladna dayman beyeshteko mn el 7aal wel wad3 wel mo3anah. akid mesh kol el awda3 perfect . bas maftekersh kol wa7ed beye3mel elly 3aleh
2- i think enaha dayra . kol wa7ed fi mawke3o beysabeb azma li wa7ed tany..
ex: wa7ed beya7'od rashwa .. howa wa7ed menena ..w beysabeb azma lelly beyedfa3 el rashwa .. w beysabeb azma bardo lelly mesh beyedfa3 .3ashan sho3'lo mesh hayemshy..
el sha7's elly beyedfa3 rashwa da .. akid beye3mel 7aga bardo yebawaz biha el system elly mashy beye2her 7ad aw beyezlemo ..
fa ba2et dayra mo3'laka keda .. kol wa7ed beyeshteky mn el system w mn el zaman .. w howa fi nafs el wa2t 3amel azma
3- beydaye2ny awy mawdoo3 el kasal da . el nas betkasel te3mel sho3'laha . w betkasel ta7tafez bi kees el chispy le7ad ma tela2y zebala termih
w beykaselo yo2afo fi tabor 3ashan yeshtero 7aga , bi monasbet el tawabir .. ana kol ma agy 2a2ta3 tazkara fel metro lazem at7'ane2 .. kol marra 2ala2y wa7ed zareef yeegy ye2oly hatly tazkara ma3ak , aw wa7ed ye2om da7'el fel taboor.
4- aktar 7aga mostafeza bashofha el mo3aksa fel shaware3.. ya3ny el fale7 elly bey3akes bent da .. mota7'ayel lamma ye2olaha ya gamil . hat2olo wenta kaman gamil .. ma akid ya 2ema hatnafadlo . ya 2ema hateshtemo .. ya3ny law mesh ader 7'ales w ma7room .. bos fel 7'abasa mn 3'er ma heya ta7'od balha .. enama to3od te2ol fi kalam .. w te2afel el share3 w habal ..
5- 7aga ba2a mewadeyana wara awy .. el wasta wel kosa wel tabi7' .. howa elly beyda7'al 7ad bi wasta da . di 7aga fi kemet el fasaad ba2a .. w betgebna wara .. la2eno akid elly da7'el bi wasta da ma3andosh el kafa2a . w momken yekon 3ando kafa2a . bas fi gami3 el 7alat bete3mel 7'ala fi el system. w sa3at ketir momken tenzel bi el mostawa beta3 el makan elly mashya fiih el wasta
6- el no2ta di malhash esm awy . .bas bashofha ketir.. ya3ny momken yeb2a wa7ed beye3mel 7aga 3'alat .. bas beybarar li nafso enaha mesh 3'alat .. w lamma yeshof 7ad beye3melha .. ye2ool eh da w bosso da folan beye3mel kaza kaza .. ma3a eno howa kaman beye3mel nafs el 7aga.. bas beyetkalem bi alb gamed 3ashan ma7adesh ye3raf ..w momken yekon howa fi dema3'o 3ando mobarerat lelly beye3melo ..
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ma2oltesh wala kelma 3'alat...w 2abl makammel a7eb awadda7 enny mesh bashaga3 ay 7ad 3ala enno y3mel 7aga 3'alat.....bas elmoshkela ennina fe 7aga esmaha bel english ''vicious circle'' 7aga zay elbeeda wala elfar5a...elly by7awel maydf3sh rashwa by2ool tab mana law madafa3tesh malkoll bydfa3...w 7agthom hatmshy wana 7agty mesh hatmshy...welly bya5od by2ollak tab mahomma bydfa3o...elly medaye2 maydfa3sh....fa teegy tdawar 3al 7al ybtedy meneen mat3rafsh mafrood nksar eldayra mneen!
neksar el dayra men ay no2tah....that's what's easy about a "dayrah."
in other words, the being of the circle is a blessing in itself because it can be broken from an almost infinite number of points. So, instead of losing time thinking if we should start with the rashi walla al mortashi...we start with either and hence we have broken the cycle...tataaaa, :)
very good comments and enjoyed your comments very much, :D
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